Congratulations to Megan Wood who is Class 8’s winner for week 1 of the 100 word challenge. This is her entry:
Looking down, I was surprised to see a bright, beautiful crystal clear river. The fish swimming around in the water were a beautiful sight. There were fluffy little ducklings darting round the stream like a racing car. But in the corner of my eye I saw a dark, faint shadow rustling through the crunching leaves. What was it I thought. But as it got more visible I could make out that it was a sharp, prickly hedgehog sniffing around the trees. It was a lovely little hedgehog. He was hunting for berries and things to eat. But off he trotted back into the darkness.
This is very good : )
this was awesome! π
Hi this is Cerys I am enjoying what we are doing in English and art and all the other subjects see u Tomorrow bye
Well don Megan I really like what u have done !!!!!!
thanks cerys
the 100 word challenge is fun :-]
Hi well done Megan w love yours you disserved it Megan w p.s hi cerys lily
well done like the heghog idea from Lana
yeh good work love the fishys π
I love the fish darting down a stream.
Lorna
Hi lana,emily and cerys its lorna here hope your all well.
Megan I love what you have done because it is so descriptive I love it .see you on Monday ta ta.lorna.
I agree Megan has done really well. Can anyone suggest an EBI for Megan so that she could make it even better?
maybe she could, instead of saying “he was looking for THINGS to eat maybe she could be more paresis
I think that she could of tried to put looking down I was surprised to see in the middle but otherwise I thought it was absolutely amazing.you deserve it Megan.
Mrs Lyons are you doing any clubs this year?
Lorna!
Thank you lorna that’s really kind π
Your welcome meggy moo π
I think it was very interesting π
weren’t we supposed to have it at the start??
I could make it more discriptive but I couldn’t as we could only use 100 words but if it was a story setting I would have discribed it more
yeah!!!!!! you can’t or it won’t be 100 words
wow! well done meg π