Well done to Millie Owens this week, I loved your writing, you built up the suspense throughout.
I remember when my closet best friend double dared me to go in a creepy haunted castle at the exciting fun fair. So I did. Going through the dark mysterious gateway, was black and freezing cold. I started to run. I was scared. I knew I was never going to see the light of day again. I was galloping around like a lost horse. I didn’t know where I was, I was completely lost. I heard strange noises inside my head telling me to run, so I started running fast. I saw some light, so I sprinted. I finally won.









