Again a tough week for choosing a winner, but……………….
Well done to Oliver Ranken for another great piece of writing.
I stumbled through the door; checked the drawers and the cupboard and then in the corner of my eye I saw a chocolate bunny. “Right. Only one egg to go.” I searched high and low but I couldn’t find the egg. I prayed to the Easter bunny to give me a clue. But there was no luck. Right, I thought, there are only 50 more places where it could be.
Suddenly a dark figure appeared, he had massive white eyes and chocolate feet and a chocolate body. His eyes were engraved into his body and his arms too. “Yes! I found it.” I screamed excitedly. “Yipee!”
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WELL DONE OLIVER !!!!!!!!!
good work!! 😛 good use of punctuation !!
I really like the way you created suspense in your Easter Egg hunt Oliver. Well done on a great piece of writing.
well done Ollie!! good use of punctuation!!! 🙂
whoo hoo thats me