Well done to Alex Milner for this weeks challenge. Feedback with your comments and if you feel like continuing the story, then go ahead.
It was a cloudy and miserable morning when there was rain slashing onto the windows and thunder booming across the town of York. It had been a hard night for me to sleep. We were having a new cupboard delivered as the present one….. well it was a bit old and shabby.
The next day the shiny new cupboard arrived and it was in my bedroom! It looked very posh and when I opened the cupboard door there was a lovely, sunny beach with a comfy chair and an umbrella on top of it. It couldn’t possibly get any better. It was my one dream for life.
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well done alex! I like how you started your writing off with the a really good description